Fall

11/1/2012

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    Do you like the season fall ? I really like the season fall and I will tell you why. One reason I like fall is because of the nice weather. I love how fall is so fresh. Its not to hot and not to cold. I love it alot ! I like fall because every time the leaves fall down we rake them up and jump into them. I do not like to do that now because I know there are bugs on the leaves. I also like fall because of the Fair. I love to ride all the rides there. They are not that scary but they are still fun. 
   Another reason I like fall is because of halloween. Now, halloween was yesterday. It was so much fun. I dressed up as a dead girl. I had blood on my shirt and I painted my face. I even had a torn up teddy bear. I got lots of candy from trick or treating! I was really happy about that. These are some things that I like to do in the fall and what I like about it.
Rebecca
11/8/2012 06:55:55 am

I like the way you wrote, but when you said "I love it alot" a lot should have a space between it, but otherwise it was good.

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Alejandra
11/8/2012 06:56:21 am

The paragraph is good, but there should be a period between them and I. In the fifth sentence.

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